Opening Edit
Start your story with confidence. Make a lasting impression from the very first page, and gain actionable guidance to help you revise and strengthen the rest of your manuscript.
The big-picture stage is so important, but I understand that a developmental edit – or even a manuscript critique – can be out of reach for many romance authors. My Opening Edit offers an affordable middle ground:
I’ll edit and review your first 10,000 words, leaving detailed comments directly on your manuscript alongside an editorial letter that brings together the bigger-picture feedback and highlights key sentence-level improvements to guide you through your revision process.
Your opening pages establish your characters, voice, pacing, tone, and the promises you’re making to your reader. In romance, they also need to give readers a sense of the romantic story ahead – from the spark of attraction and emotional tension to the kind of relationship they can expect to follow.
By looking closely at those first 10,000 words, we can identify what’s already working beautifully and uncover areas that may need more attention as you continue through the manuscript.
You’ll come away with a clearer understanding of your opening, practical guidance you can apply throughout the rest of your book, and a stronger sense of direction as you revise.
Think of it as a focused editorial deep dive into the beginning of your novel.
Ready to take a closer look at your opening?
Let’s give your story the strong start it deserves.
Pricing
£200
*Projects under £300 are payable in full upfront.
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